Round 1-On-spot
Li Liying：Now let's start our first Round“On-spot”.I will try to contact with our correspondent Zhan Qiang.Hello，Zhan Qiang...How can they keep contacting with each other？
Zhan Qiang：Hello Liying，I am now standing at Beijing Traffic Arrangement Center.As you can see，the policemen behind me are all busy with their work.Today they have a special and important task—to ensure the marrow from the marrow donor program in Shanghai can be transported to the hospital in Xuanwu District in Beijing safely and quickly.Look at the screen behind me，it is the Beijing traffic information feed-back system diagram.As we can see，there are some green lines as well as some red ones.The red ones represent the roads where there are heavy traffic.And the green ones just indicate that the traffic is not heavy.I have just interviewed the commander here.He said his job is to direct the cars to avoid those busy roads，so that the marrow can be transported to the hospital in time.The driver and the commander keep contact with each other through those interphones which just like the navigation system.So the driver can follow the commander's order.Till now everything goes very well.This is correspondent Zhan Qiang reporting from Beijing.
Li Liying：Thank you for your report.
Shi Jinhua：Thanks for Zhan Qiang's report.Now let's welcome contestant number 2，Wang Zhuoran.Hello，Zhuoran.
Wang Zuoran：Hello Jinhua，Now I'm located in the Beijing Capital Airport，and within ten minutes the flight 233 from Shanghai will arrive.Now from the camera you can see the airport faculty is ready for the arriving.And an ambulance is just waiting behind the exit and making sure the marrow can will be transported to the hospital as soon as possible.Just now I interviewed an airport assistant，and she told me some details on the plane，like that the carrier needed to shake the preserving can every two minutes，for fear of the cell being curdled.Also this marrow box can't pass through the security check-point because the rays will damage and even kill the cell，so this box is the first thing which is admitted to be free from the check-point.So far everything is fine.
Shi Jinhua：I have a question for you：What's the response of the airport officials？
Wang Zhuoran：Well，we can see the airport pays great attention to this transportation and their service is more human-oriented.At last，I represent all the staff members of the airport to wish this marrow transplant program will proceed successfully.This is correspondent Zhuoran from Beijing Capital Airport.
Shi Jinhua：Thanks for your report.
Li Liying：This time I will contact with our correspondent Song Xuan，Hello Song Xuan.Could you tell us what is bone-marrow transplant？
Song Xuan：Hello，everyone.I am Song Xuan now at Chaoyang Hospital in Beijing and reprorting for you in front of the operation room..As we know that today there will be a bone-marrow transplant in this hospital.Now，it's already 7：00.You can see behind me，most people relating to this surgery are busy prepared around the gate.Just now，the patient today told me that，if she could be reborn，she would do her best to reward those who had ever helped her.And I also get some information from the in-charge-chief Doctor Wang who tells me that a successful bone marrow transplant requires expert medical doctors，nurse and other support staff who have very experienced in it.Luckily，what we own today is an intact system that can provide the patient and her families with emotional and psycological support in advance during and after the transplant.What's more，a BMT is relatively new medical procedure being used to treat once incurable diseases while it dose not privide 100%assurance that the disease will be overcome.Now it's time for the last circle of prepartion All the people except the doctor team is parted and the patient is lying on her bed and waiting for the anesthesia.All of us are feeling very nervous，including her mother who bursted into tears，saying she really appreciates everyone's care and no matter what the result is.But she believes it will be successful.So best wishes for them！And later I will offer the further information.Thank you very much！This is correspondent Song Xuan from Beijing.
Li Liying：Thank you for your report.
Shi Jinhua：Now it's time for the last contestant，Li Yanjie.Hello，Yanjie.
Li Yanjie：I am in the Shanghai Marrow Center.And after 3 hours'hard working，the suitabe marrow has been collected.An expert just told me the search started in the last year，it was very lucky to find the suitable marrow in Shanghai at last.And I just visted the donor Mr.Zhang.
Shi Jinhua：You've just mentioned Mr.Zhang.I want to know his health condition right now
Li Yanjie：He is at good condition now He told me that the process was not as horrible as he thought，he was happy and honored to do so.At last he sent his best wishes to Xiao Ming.Through the camera you can see all the workers are busy with the packing process.They will use the most advanced equipment to store.Ok，with the last working procedure finished，the collection part is done.They will send it to Beijing as quikly as they can.Let's hope everything will go well in Beijing and best wishes to Xiao Ming.This is Li Yanjie from Shanghai.Back to you Jinhua.
Shi Jinhua：Now let announce the result of the first part.Congratulations to…
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这个在实训中展示的环节，给笔者留下这样几个印象。一是所有四位出镜连线的记者都是女性，这种状态就给笔者提供了很大的比较空间。从声音状态来比较，她们四位有显著的不同，这使得现场连线的效果“丰富多彩”了；从个人的语言表达风格来比较，WZR的流畅表达令报道“一气呵成”，体现报道者的“自信”；LYJ的清晰使得报道“掷地有声”，展示出报道者的“郑重其事”；ZQ的细节挖掘让报道“别致而具体”，表现出报道者的“身临其境”；SX的平稳细腻使报道“娓娓道来”，糅进了报道者的“我在现场”形成的独特感受。所以，整体的连线报道表现为“可信、可听、可看”。稍加训练后能够改善的地方是：减少紧张而自然呈现“事实”，不必回避手中厚厚的“事实”积累成的一手资料。
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由于这个环节整体的呈现令笔者满意，所以，进入笔者主观映象的画面没有被改动多少。只是有这样几个细节，如果加进已经呈现的过程中的话，笔者认为会更具“现场”的“报道”感。
一是不必因为是在演播间的灯光下实训，就把自己努力往符合一般意义的“上镜”标准上收拾，只要牢记自己是在符合所报道的“情境”中进行现场连线就可以了；
二是不必努力去看手中已有的报道材料，如果感到不能脱稿的话，就照着材料报道，这样给受众的印象就是“真实可信”，不会对报道者的素质和能力有任何的怀疑或贬低；
三是如果能够“灵机一动”地设计一些如“噢，主播，对不起，现在从我的正面开来一辆大货车，我得一边往旁边挪，一边继续报道啊。”或“噢，主播及观众朋友，现在风很大，我的声音稍为高些……”这样既增加“现场感”的表现，又会体现现场连线记者周全的思维能力及对现场因素加以突出的素质。
总之，作为出现在某处的现场连线记者，你具有完全的“主动权”来驾驭和展示对现场情况的了解，完全不必要被我们已经形成的“我一定要流利、完整地报道”的关系所牵制，因为现场的瞬息万变是人无法预测和掌控的。